Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible.
Nowadays, several countries believe that they should concentrate on producing foods supply for the people and transport it for the economy as little as possible. In my opinion, I completely agree with this point of view.
Firstly, The demand for food in a nation is extremely high and this will create major opportunities for local people to work in farming and food processing industries which can resolve the unemployment problems. For example, In Indonesia, nearly half of the people work in the farming sector. Secondly, If a nation has capable to provide for all the citizens, both the Economy and Security will balance and develop strongly. Besides, mass production of all kinds of food items, a country can prepare for any worst disasters. For instance, in Vietnam, when a flood happens on the central side of the country, the government shall take the nation’s food which helps and encourage these unfortunate people to overcome this bad time. Moreover, Food import includes transportation costs, taxation, and other fees which increase the price of foods. This makes it the numerous people who have low income will hard to purchase food. Furthermore, imported food does not have the same quality and freshness as the local markets provide. If transport the food crates for a high distance and long period of time, the value of the food might degrade, and in some cases, toxic chemicals can appear when they expired.
In conclusion, A good nation is a country that they have well prepared for the food crisis, therefore the government has the authority to produce mass foods for every household before deciding on import.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1086, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ood crates for a high distance and long period of time, the value of the food might degrade, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63707865136 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1085938743 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4166666667 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39796435596 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146534236158 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859240504135 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281542991594 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023469833493 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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