Some people think advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advertising, a marketing strategy often deployed to lure public interest to a defined venture, is not a novel phenomenon. While some persons subscribe to the school that promotion is an absolute catalyst for the decision to buy an item, others deem it has gained much currency that it no longer draw interest. I will bear my opinion on the topic, though not until the twin standpoints are succintly enunciated.
To start with, the maxim that advertising is the soul of business still hold sway as it is often expressed to connote its breakthrough in sometimes making people go for an item that is not on their wishlist. It goes without saying that promotions usually avail patrons the privilege to have the knowledge of a commodity and its perceived usefulness, hence eliciting a demand. In recent memory, for instance, hand sanitizers and face masks were frequently advertised on various media channels in Nigeria, just so patrons can become aware of its germane influence in cushioning the effect of Corona virus.
By a different token, inundating advertising that has reigned supreme overtime has elicited some backlash from the public who have had enough of panning their eyes and ears to what they have seen or heard countlessly. Reiterating what is not clandestine but glaring, over and again, is not just a recipe for boredom, but depression. In exemplifying this, Abraham Maslow avers in his "Hierarchy of Needs Theory" that once a given level of need has been satisfied or met it no longer entice or stimulate, thus the reason advertising is no longer eye-catching.
In my opinion, advertising is an appealing marketing strategy for making people purchase an item they would otherwise have ignored, but for the gains behind some of the promotions which are too vital to snub.
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but, hence, if, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89877676493 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622895622896 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3598986485 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.7 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150879262932 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504896835293 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399221597947 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882927482803 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120646845932 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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