Education is one of the keys to success in life. Some groups of people agree with the importance of education especially university education which people wanting to be successful have to receive, while other people think that success in life does not depend on education in a university. This essay will consider both viewpoints.
There are a few reasons why successful people have to graduate from universities. One of them is that people who study in a university get specific knowledge from their majors, which is different from people having an opportunity to study only in a school in that these people have only basic knowledge that everyone knows. It means that when they become adults and begin to work in a company, the people who have never gotten in university education will not be able to compete with graduate students in term of knowledge; as a result, it is extremely difficult for them to be one of the successful people. In addition, people who study in universities have many chances to face both success and failure from a lot of projects in the universities, and there are professors guiding them in the right way, whereas others have to try many things themselves. Thus, the way of success might be slower for people deciding not to get in a university.
However, there are plenty of wealthy people who are very successful in life not receiving education from any university. The people in these groups show that it is not necessary to study in a university since everything depends on our own efforts and can succeed by our hands. Mark Zuckerberg, the CEO of Facebook, for example, left his university before finishing his bachelor's degree, which means he did not receive knowledge from the university any longer. Nevertheless, he became a billionaire and was one of the successful people although not getting the education from the university. University education, consequently, cannot indicate our success in the future.
In conclusion, personally, I think that we should get in university education, but we also have to do something because unless we spend time doing anything, it is impossible to be a successful person. There might be a good chance to succeed in our lives in the future should we start to do everything the best today.
Without any doubt, society…
Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of desperate people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether to be successful in life university education should achieve. Whereas others it is no need. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. First of all, in the competitive world, more and more people choose to study in university due to get high standard job in order to meet the needs of life for that person should have a good qualification which have to attained from universities. The second point is, nowadays, some people do not have a job, wandering because of competitive in particular field. To exemplify, when the advancement of computers, more people to study in computer sectors. Consequently, there is a less chance in getting work in this sectors. As a consequence, people believe without any university studies it is to be difficult to be success.
Moving towards second argument of this debate, the first point is, success is not about to getting job that, as some individuals that considered. There are makes which is accomplished successful in life without any education not even know how to read and write. This is possible by patience and good characteristics mindset of people. Apart from this, those who have even good qualification and money, end the life in suicide. In that point of view, success is able to get the way people how they can handle the various problems and resolving matters in a better way. As a result, even though, people are educated there are different things need every person should achieve rather than education by good mindset.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, I concur that, although education is a main part to be succeed, whereas patience is also a factor that is imperative in life to be successful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93994778068 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84673857939 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472584856397 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4752645279 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.133333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291063913305 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10916784376 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624223368783 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188585665997 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07412225943 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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