Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern life, crime becomes more serious and the rate of wrongdoers has an up trend. That the measures which should be implemented to decrease crime has controversial. Several people believe that the most effective solution to tackle this issue it to serve prison sentences for longer period while others argue that there are some different methods which are more better. This essay will discuss both opinions.
To begin with, there are some positive influences of putting offenders in jail for a long term. First and foremost, longer prison sentence will act as a deterrent and will be one useful measure to tackle rising crime. For example, when the governments impose the strict laws which are tough on crime toward serious crimes, criminals will not re-offend and as a result, the crime rate will reduce. in addition, giving wrongdoers a longer prison is also provide them a chance of rehabilitation. Due to the fact that those offenders need to have more time to reflect their illegal actions and re-educated to become an useful member before being released back into society.
On the other hand, the governments should impose some different punishments depending on the dangerous level of crimes. In terms of crimes which are not serious, the courts can give a range of non-custodial sentences such as fines, probation orders or community services orders. For instance, society service is a good way to provide offenders the opportunity to give some positive back to society, and so it may improve their characters. Moreover, the governments should focus on the cause of crimes to have suitable penalties. It is clearly seen that it is unfair to impose the same sentences on people who commit a crime for starvation and a murder.
In my opinion, besides giving longer sentences, alternative methods play an integral part to reduce crime. Longer prison sentences should remain for those who commit the serious crimes like murder or assassination while the others offenders should be taken into consideration for some different methods.
In conclusion, in order to deter the crime, the governments should take some different solutions to ensure that effective polices are in place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...re are some different methods which are more better. This essay will discuss both opinions....
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...s a result, the crime rate will reduce. in addition, giving wrongdoers a longer pr...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...ving wrongdoers a longer prison is also provide them a chance of rehabilitation. Due to...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...legal actions and re-educated to become an useful member before being released bac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16201117318 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69259834129 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530726256983 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1491652121 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.705882353 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270080911862 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876275662172 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645746680375 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152915775358 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552364286583 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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