Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether children should start their formal education as early as possible or delay it until they are at least 7-year-old. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and then give my viewpoint.
On the one hand, there are a variety of positive outcomes for children to go to school at a young age. First, and foremost, the primary advantage is that early year education will provide children with the ability to acquire knowledge and information easier. As a result, these children would have a head start over their peers pursuing higher education. Furthermore, they would have opportunities to figure out their natural talents. Most Vietnamese children, for example, are sent to kindergarten at the age of 3 - 4 to learn some basic skills such as addition and subtraction. Those showing potential will be cared for by teachers and parents with an aim to train children to develop those strengths.
On the other hand, several individuals advocate a later start to formal schooling due to a number of reasons. Because of later commencement of study, kids will be offered more time to learn many things via their parents at home. This will result in strengthening their relationship and their mutual understanding. In addition, it might also be greatly beneficial for children to make the most of their childhood in which they can cultivate numerous competencies and inclinations through daily activities at home.
In conclusion, I personally support that it would be well-advised for parents to send their children to school at an early age. Despite being safe with their parents at home, late education would support fewer chances for children to engage in extracurricular activities which would equip them with vital soft skills including teamwork and communication skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18088737201 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88943526197 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5835606199 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271457412844 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958189250215 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822970442847 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188390484834 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999493286057 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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