Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people opine, a change in climate could bring abundance of difficulties in running of a business. While other people have opposite view and claim that it provides various opportunities for businesses to flourish. However, I believe climate variation has more negative impact on businesses.
To embark on, certain people think that weather change is advantageneous in progression of businesses. It helps in increasing the demand of goods as well as the income of buisenessman. With change in weather, people’s needs change, for instance- when climate changes from summer to winter, demands of comodities like woollen clothes, firewood and many more things constantly rise up, so it induces the demands of numerous things and opens up the opportunity for various small businesses to grow. Hence, it boosts up the income of shopkeepers and small businesses.
However, I intends that weather alteration has plenty of drawbacks. On the one hand, it creates obstruction for small businesses to run safely in severe conditions. The immediate change in weather like heavy rains force the shopkeepers to shut down their businesses for their security. Also, the adverse effect of flooding from rain can destroy their selling things too. From this fear, many vendors are unable to do businesses for several months, ultimately has detrimental effect on their earning. On the other hand, small businesses are in great loss because of large firms which provide essential goods at home even in harsh conditions. So, indirectly the climate change has negative impact on many small businessmen.
To conclude, I believe climate change produce bad impact on businesses like creating problems for vendors, shopkeepers to run businesses safely and even diminish their sources of earning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39928057554 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85049416989 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4697904375 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340254630023 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108734255246 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844787906263 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229291108439 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100969640467 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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