Climate change is considered to deteriorate the business; in the meantime, others believe that this phenomenon could also bring business advantages. From my point of view, even though some features of climate change are beneficial, in generally it is still harmful to humankind in the long run.
Climate change could lead to extreme weather conditions or even natural disasters such as drought, flood, forest fire, etc. These disasters will have significantly negative economic impact on particular areas. First of all, factories and business centers are destroyed and isolated, supplies are cut down. Second, local people have to suffer not only physically and mentally but also financially, after that their spending ability reduces substantially. For example, the center of Vietnam suffered from a severe flood in the last June and July and the regional economic growth is negative for the year 2020.
On the other hand, some feature of climate change that are not serious can bring positive outcomes to some specific businesses. When average temperature is higher and higher year after year, the demand for summer products is also increasing. Products that help us to endure the heat of the summer could be air-conditional, sunblock products for skin, iced beverages, delivery service etc. Summer in Vietnam, sales of air-conditioner always increase for the reason that people need to equip their house with (more) cooling devices. Moreover, food delivery services like Grab or Now, which has been developing in Vietnam in the past few years, experience a fairly high demand in summer since people avoid going out to eat, they’d rather stay at home and order food delivered to their home.
Besides, from a larger view, ice melting can open more sea routes that would stimulate freight service. China is accused of taking advantages of global warming to be beneficial by this effect of ice melting.
In conclusion, global warming and climate change will bring more negativity to humankind rather than some business opportunities. People should raise awareness about this problem to partly mitigate it in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in general, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3353115727 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67493881434 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617210682493 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6440707263 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194978995023 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629225779323 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060760373506 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114939471836 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598599444079 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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