some people think that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while other believe it other important function. discuss both the view and give you opinion.
It is widely acknowledged that education is a matter of all time. A contention made by some people that schools have to offer a practical subject which helps students joining the workplaces, while, others have refuted the idea. this essay would rather discuss both points of the view and will provide my own opinion.
obviously, if the educational institutes would just focus on teaching students based upon the working requirement, it would be of far more beneficial. That is to say, a candidate won't have to wait longer to get a job, as well as it's financially rewarding since the candidate get paid on a regular base. Furthermore, the developmental pace would rather retard, as all students, for example, go on to medical schools, there will be shortages in different vital areas, such as electric workers, builders, and others.
on the other hand, some people would rather believe that schools should only teach general subjects with no regard to the markets requirements. Successfulness would only be achieved when candidates select their own subject, in another way, forcing a person to go through certain avenue would kill their talents and set them up for failure.
moreover, in the term of development, the fact that this would definitely be affected the most because job satisfaction is far more important as a candidate come to do a job he/she don't like.
In conclusion, having looked at the both argument, I would rather inclined to believe that educational institutes should prepare the students with the knowledge and skills that are highly required in the markets. Nevertheless, students interest have to take into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13011152416 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84242984357 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9086223035 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2727272727 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210470995946 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775174258527 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630927555714 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111665821452 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692442174824 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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