Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In recent years, the increasing world population is putting pressure on the environment in several aspects. It is often a debatable issue by some people about the extinction of biological life in this modern era, whereas others argue that it is not the only cause, as numerous factors affect the environment. In this essay, I will explore both views along with my opinion and provide a proper conclusion.
To commence with, as a consequence of globalization, industries emerged within a short span all over the world, resulting in clearance of rainforest- known as lungs of the earth. In other words, increasing demand for various products leads to the erection of firms by demolishing the dense forest areas in the name of land greed. To illustrate, a recent study from environmental researchers, over the past few decades, many species lost their natural habitats due to deforestation by humans. So, this resulted in the living species on the verge of extinction.
On the other hand, apart from deforestation there exist severe problems that are overlooked by people such as global warming, as it imbalances the ecosystem. Having said that, the growth in factories and vehicles raised the emissions and exhaust fumes. Also, technology aids to assist humans in many ways, it’s carbon emissions makes soar in temperatures ultimately leads to extreme weather conditions. For instance, recent innovations in the science and technology field have provided many devices to humans such as cheap air flights, air conditioners, cars and many more emit hazardous gases into air that contaminate the ecological life on the earth.
To recapitulate, when it comes to environmental concerns, people often divide their choice, some believe that loss of certain species is considered a central environmental problem. However, others argue that rising pollution levels because of human malicious activities is also included as one of the causes, and I support this view as humans should protect the environment in order to protect their future from extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, whereas, apart from, for instance, in fact, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33435582822 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93315218847 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613496932515 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.493902766 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.769230769 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126264442786 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406652760373 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417152863671 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075199086725 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404366541288 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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