Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Every nations have a great concern about education which is one of the important domains. Some claims that everyone has a equal chance to received university education, so the government should make it free for students no matter what they have enough money or not. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.
Many students want to access to universities in a bid to ensure their bright future. Universities may give students oppportunities to approach precious knowledge. They may broaden knowledge and apply it into their real life. The knowledge that they are given not only about theory but also about many useful skills like time management or team working. These skills are really essential when students find a job. Thus, students that study in universities normally have higher abilities to chase the top jobs.
However, freeing college tuition may cause some problems. Firstly, this action put pressure on the budget of the government. The public purse is a limited source, and it have to pay for loads of spheres such as army or health. In the long term, the government may not balance the amount of money spend on each field, so this possibly will lead to other serious problems. Secondly, the motivation in studying of students may be lessen. Students need not to pay for the college tuition because it is paid by the government. Therefore, some of them may think that it is unnecessary to try in studying beacause they also will not lose anything if they have bad results. This make students become more irresponsible.
In conclusion, I firmly hold the view that the government should not free the college tuition because of some negative impacts it can cause.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every nations have a great concern about educ...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... domains. Some claims that everyone has a equal chance to received university edu...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ublic purse is a limited source, and it have to pay for loads of spheres such as arm...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pay'?
Suggestion: pay
...udents may be lessen. Students need not to pay for the college tuition because it is p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97153024911 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64311969773 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7455745096 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6111111111 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344922733913 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940192331247 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929094562605 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207237316416 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135218024277 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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