Some people think that the fictional violence portrayed on television is harmless entertainment.
Others disagree and think that it encourages violent behaviour. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern days, various kinds of entertainment have gained in popularity in a great many ways, including fictional violence. Although this entertaining genre is considered to be harmless to some extent, it is also believed to have detrimental impacts on human society related to violent behaviors. This essay will analyze the two aforementioned perspectives and express my personal point of view.
In several circumstances, fictional violence depicted on media channels seems to do no harm to the audience since it cannot exist in real life. Series "Avengers" of Marvel film production is a prime example of this case. All the violent scenes are performed by imaginary characters and happen outside the Earth so ordinary people are not capable of doing so. Additionally, violent behaviors are required in certain particular occupations like some professional spies of the CIA in the film called "Impossible mission" and seem to be irrelevant in other careers.
However, fictional violence portrayed on TV is believed to have adverse effects and contribute to criminals ranging from juvenile delinquency to serial murder. In terms of adolescents, these figures are easier to be influenced by violent scenarios than those in other age groups owing to their immature mind. As a consequence, they tend to imitate those behaviors in their actual life which leads to numerous undesirable ramifications such as vandalism or theft. Furthermore, when these figures grow up, they may perform more devious and reckless behaviors to achieve their needs at all cost, even serial murder.
To reiterate, whether fictional violence portrayed in the virtual world is harmless or not depends on how people are exposed to it. In my personal viewpoint, I suppose that this kind of entertainment does no harm to people as long as humans are self-determined and able to adjust their behaviors in every situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, i suppose, in particular, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40666666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21305669625 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0268009069 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176526413074 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574352210925 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042195790378 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101841133401 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223282858481 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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