Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The optimum age for children to start school has engendered controversy amongst the public. While some people believe the earlier the better, I am on board with those who argue for a later than 7 years old.
Advocate of an early school time for children cite their good memory as a crucial factor. A growing body of studies reveal that it is the the age of three when children are best at memorizing and imitating. If children can receive education at that time, more chances are that they would acquire more knowledge, which gives them a critical edge over others who start school late down the road in study. However, the problem with such argument is that memory is not the only factor that affects students’ academic performance, and I believe, considerations like mental stability and independence are more vitally important. Children, around 3 years old, tend to be more attached to their parents, and forcing them to leave their beloved ones and integrate into a totally unfamiliar atmosphere simply means too much stress for them, which could do a disservice to their mental health. As a result, not only affect their study but also ruin their life later on.
So I agree with those who argue for a later-than-7-years-old school age, as children at that age tend to be more psychologically ready to embrace challenges and socialize with peers. Raising questions when necessary, expressing own ideas confidently, and sharing opinions with peers, 7-years-old children are more proactive and cooperative in school, which would equip them with more soft and hard skills, and optimize their learning outcome. Take Finland and Denmark as examples, where students attend schools relatively late but achieve better academic outcome in the world.
To conclude, despite children memorize things more effectively and efficiently at an early age, only when they are ready can schools nurture them into overall healthy and knowledgeable young citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17665615142 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80709597938 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5155274104 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153686552003 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653842934796 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051258127554 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110445242647 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577507960261 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.