Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that, receiving certificate from established university in the best way to secure professional career. It is often argued that, getting a degree from renounce university is the positive development for getting good job whilst other disagree and think that direct work experience create more opportunity to explore individual experience in multiple sectors. This essay agrees that, university degree are recognize worldwide and equip student with more relevant knowledge and skills to shape their career in more stable way. The essay will discuss both point of view.
With regards to the positive concern, university degree create the plenty of opportunity to explore the individual knowledge and skills in professional area and they do not have to wait long to find out the suitable work for them. Moreover, it helps student to have specialized knowledge according to their interest subject which further help them boost up their horizon in multiple professional sectors. It is therefore agreed that, graduation certificate from respective university helps to shape out student career initially and accordingly creates more possibilities to have a stable career in future endeavor. For example, a recent study of 2018 conducted by “Department of Employee, Nepal” found that, individual with university degree are more employed in higher position for long time in comparison to those who do not have such university recognize certificate.
However, many disagree and feels that, direct work opportunity also helps people to have a stable work position in reputed organization. It allow individual to have an empathetic understanding of the professional culture, crystalized personality having updates with the required knowledge and skills relevant to the profession in a quite longer period of time. Despite this, person with graduate degree from recognize university is still the best way to secure professional career in a good position and this essay disagrees on the direct work opportunity for getting more relevant knowledge and skills. For instance, this is most evident in my country that, person with academic qualification are more knowledge on multiple discipline than the uneducated person.
In conclusion, while graduate certificate allow the student more opportunity to work with reputed organization for a longer period of time, some still feel that a person can get multiple professional experience from the direct work environment. However, I personally think that, getting work experience after completing the academic degree would leads towards more sustainable future that any shortcut procedure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6325 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99705584699 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4625 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7117651553 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.928571429 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197114955829 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856029026848 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076210938106 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153160966014 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796684422169 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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