It is true that there is widespread concern over the practice of extreme sports, to the
extent that some people argue that they should be outlawed by government
legislation. While nobody should underestimate the risks, I would argue that people
should be free to practice such sports if they so wish.
On the one hand, critics of dangerous sports give strong reasons why governments
should impose an official ban on such activities. Firstly, they argue that such a
measure is necessary on safety grounds. There have been numerous incidents where
members of rescue services have had to put their own lives at risk to save extreme
sports enthusiasts who are in life-threatening situations. Secondly, it is necessary at
times to infringe on personal freedoms because people who lack the necessary
experience or who are not at the peak of their physical condition sometimes take up
dangerous sports. Such irresponsible behavior can only be prevented by banning
these sports.
On the other hand, I concur with those who argue that people should be free to do
extreme sports, although I believe it is necessary for individuals to abide by the safety
rules. One reason is that the imposition of sensible safety measures has been proven to
minimize the risk of accidents and injuries. For example, all sports which carry a
significant element of danger, such as scuba diving or paragliding should be
supervised by an experienced and professionally qualified instructor. Another factor is
that there is now a range of essential sports gear to protect those who practice
dangerous sports. Such equipment ranges from safety ropes and helmets to water-
resistant clothing.
In conclusion, it seems to me that dangerous sports should be permitted, although
those who take part have a responsibility to adhere to the recommended safety
procedures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 22, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dangerous
...s gear to protect those who practice dangerous sports. Such equipment ranges from safe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31879194631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90844367964 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6275845389 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261778256944 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092799018908 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708797975494 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759108905702 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656408967927 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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