Wise and careful use of water always a hot topic for discussion. However these discussions are not enough fruitful in curb the unwanted usage of water. I believe governments across the world, must implement strict laws to control the water usage because of multifarious reasons which i mentioned below.
To begin with, due to global warming our sources of water reducing year by year. If this trend continues, next generation will run out of water, even for drinking. This scarcity for water increases in future as well unless the governments take necessary actions to control the water usage. People in some pat of the world have abundance of water supply, therefore, they use the water lavishly. Governments should conduct seminars to make them aware of the famine face by the people other parts of the world. For example, some Asian nations have enough water for drinking and other purposes but, on the other side people in African countries such as Ethiopia and Somalia do not have enough potable water.
Moreover, multinational companies overuse the existing potable water sources for increasing their profit. They could use sea water after treatment, but they never do that because of the high cost for sea water treatment.Government should instruct these companies to use sea water in their factories. For instance some cement factories in my local area use a lot of potable water for cement production instead of sea water. Because of this i n the last summer we faced scarcity of water for domestic use.
To conclude, i strongly believe governments have to impose strict restriction on water use otherwise human life on eartth will not survive long.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06545454545 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67096788103 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8617508857 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256943371992 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986306514652 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397096296264 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163624981044 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429695247587 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.