Arts is one kind of talent. creative people shows their talent by arts. while many people believe that spending in arts is a wastage of money. I am of the opposite view a i believe that spending in arts is a good idea for the government.
supporters of the idea says that, industrial growth will stop because of not being sufficient in the industrial fund. so we need to spend our money for hospital, roads, school etc. So their opinion is that a government should stop spending money on arts and in more critical areas.
However, while investments in such areas are important, spending on arts is also necessary. After doing a lots of work we need some refreshment and entertainment and refresh our mind. Art galleries can attract tourists from all over the world. That's why, the possibility of returning money is superfluous. So consumption on arts is not big loss for country tradition.
Hence, it is clear that consumption on arts is beneficial both for an individual and society. Therefore funding arts is not squandering money
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Creative
Arts is one kind of talent. creative people shows their talent by arts. whil...
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...tive people shows their talent by arts. while many people believe that spending in ar...
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...tive people shows their talent by arts. while many people believe that spending in ar...
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...age of money. I am of the opposite view a i believe that spending in arts is a go...
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Suggestion: a; i
...age of money. I am of the opposite view a i believe that spending in arts is a good...
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...e of money. I am of the opposite view a i believe that spending in arts is a good...
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Suggestion: Supporters
...s is a good idea for the government. supporters of the idea says that, industrial growt...
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Suggestion: So
...eing sufficient in the industrial fund. so we need to spend our money for hospital...
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Suggestion: a lot; lots
... on arts is also necessary. After doing a lots of work we need some refreshment and en...
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Suggestion: That's
...tract tourists from all over the world. Thats why, the possibility of returning money...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ial both for an individual and society. Therefore funding arts is not squandering money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, so, therefore, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85393258427 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78830587731 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5784873582 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7142857143 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192534491044 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703918126556 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453637479034 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119434739087 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149325699071 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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