Some people think the governments should act to decide how people live in order to make a healthier life. Others think individual should decide their own lifestyle. What do you concern about? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These years have witnessed huge changes in people’s lifestyle that people have more choices to decide the way they live.It brings about a debate whether the lifestyle should be decided by the government or people themselves.
The government should make laws to keep people away from harmful lifestyles such as alcohol, drug addiction, gambling and so on. It will have negative effect on the individual,the family and the society, if people are not prevented from those bad habits. To individual,their body will be damaged with age and their development will be stopped while they are hardly to get a job or come back to their occupation. Secondly, those people’s bad habits may hurt their families and bring a burden to the family. Also, these people may increase the crime rate and social instability.
On the other hand, people have the right to pursue their lifestyle. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes. Different experiences bring different life understanding, plans and lifestyles. Some people like to live a normal life, satisfied with the small happiness. Some people like to seek the true meaning of life from the limit. Moreover,different life situation may even change people's pursuit. With increasing experience, mentality varies. People chasing stimulation may tend to be dull while stable people may go to experience different things, doing something opposite their past lifestyle.
In my opinion, life should never be determined by the government, but the government should regulate people's behavior rules to avoid people living in a bad lifestyle or change their bad habits. Only in this way can people make better choices of their own way of life and the society will be more steady.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21785714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88247475519 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3705518147 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305705960778 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104259057493 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661399522995 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204742507753 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427559669951 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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