Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that some unsafe activities should be forbidden by governments. Although there are some benefits of that, I would agree that it is not essential to ban some serious activities.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why doing risk sports should be forbidden. First, playing some unsafe activities is the most common reason cause sports accidents in young people. For example, my friend tried climbing the highest mountain in my country last week, an unexpected accident injure him and now he has to stay at the hospital. It is the reason why banning some risk sports such as Base Jumping, Heli-Skiing, and Scuba Diving is the good way to reduce the number of accidents in sports.
On the other hand, I believe that people should be encouraged to play whatever sports they love even though it is a dangerous sport. Firstly, dangerous activities can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction when we manage to do it successfully. Secondly, almost of dangerous sport is closely related to the environment, it the reason why a lot of people chose playing dangerous activities to call for environmental protection. This may lead to raising the consciousness of people about protection the natural resource around us.
In conclusion, although both banning risk sports and let people free to chose sports to play are advantageous in their own way, it seems to me that government should not forbid risk sports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82079137832 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4753791059 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257014369752 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930780743432 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687092095697 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162223710194 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512452126187 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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