Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while
others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views
and give your own opinion.
Not only once had I learned about the accidents from the dangerous sports when I turned on the TV or flicked through the pages of a newspaper over the past few months. Whether governments should outlaw the extreme sports or people can have freedom to choose any sports or activities can be a matter of considerable debate. Some people believe that the former point of view is correct while others support the latter. In this essay, I will look at both sides and give my opinion.
There are two reasons why people support the first view. Firstly, although the extreme sports are quite funny and interesting, it should be outlawed on safety grounds. It is possible for participants to lose their lives or to suffer various serious injuries. Secondly, they are not enough experience to take part in particular dangerous sport. For example, in the parachute jump, if participants are not proficient in opening at the right time, they can die.
Turning to the other side of the argument, those who are against the previous opinion may claim that furnishing the essential sports gear will decrease the probability of injury. For instance, if scuba diving is equipped for skin divers, the volume of oxygen is adequate for the process of respiration. On the other hand, people take sensible precautions in order to avoid unfortunate accidents.
All things considered, it is obvious that there are conflicting views on the topic. It is a belief that outlawing the extreme sports is necessary, whereas they are also who think participants are free to do any sports or activities. It is my firm conviction that the first argument is stronger. However, the situation can be different in different context.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95438596491 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71301821525 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3433807032 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226820342022 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593237788337 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642903283376 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124068457403 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762500424445 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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