Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion
Some people are of the opinion that holding an international sports competition is beneficial for the country. However, some others are opposed to this idea, claiming that it does more harm than good to the country. From my perspective, it is advantageous for the country.
On the one hand, if the country hosting the international sports event, the local government has to spend a great deal of money on it to ensure every service as well as the facilities are good enough for the sports match to take place. Besides, the airports also need to prepare well in order to welcome a number of foreigners from various countries all around the world coming to enjoy this event and make sure there will be as few delays as possible. These activities, of course, if are not handled well, they can cause great damage to the country's economy and the image of the country in foreigners’ eyes.
On the other hand, I believe that holding this huge event can bring us a lot of benefits. First of all, to take part in this occasion, a lot of exotic people will travel to the countries, as a result, it boosts the local economy as they have to pay out for food, hotels, and travelling, etc. Furthermore, it also gives the country a chance to develop the tourism industry and promote an unique cultures and traditional customs. For example, in 2018, World cup was hosted by Russia, and it is reported that the event brought great profit to this nation, which encourages other countries to hold major sports events in the future.
In conclusion, becoming a host of an international sports event does the country a great service in developing its economy and making its culture become well-known among sports fans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...evelop the tourism industry and promote an unique cultures and traditional customs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, of course, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75757575758 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61766701788 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7116246753 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5454545455 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266558782052 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105467135066 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918218935559 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166230715069 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479478330372 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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