Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement of technology, high technology appliances have regarded as a necessary tool for children. They play an important role in facilitating education and communication. However, some people argue that computers and mobile phones usage has numerous drawbacks which overshadows its merits. I disagree with this belief to some extent as in my opinion, but only in some cases.
On the one hand, at the turn of 21st century, many materials are prepared at online library, containing various collection of books. Students can access to them everytime and everywhere. Implementing curiosity is immediately answered by searching on the internet. For instance, more peers have to make themselves been ready before the examination days. They would read a lot of books and do some practices all-day-all-night, finding online solution is one amongst many ways to reduce the struggling time and lead them consistently read. According to parental concern, parents could check with their offsprings if they already arrived at school, ensuring that they are safe from car accident or even crime. Parents could follow what their children do through Instagram, Facebook and Twitter, to understand when they stay at school.
On the other hand, it is an undeniable fact that social networks involve to young people in the way of laptop and cell phone use. There are some reports that 30% of criminals are juveniles, arresting as hacker, cyber crime-related. Without carefulness from adults, junior would commit crime increasingly. For this reason, government has to regulate internet usage in people below 25 years old before a number of young offenders surge to critical point.
In conclusion, spending time on computers and mobiles has more advantages if users realize dangerous, avoiding illegal propose should be instilled our children before they commit crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... our children before they commit crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42611683849 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91511847224 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4538892253 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190019506966 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517120561134 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640466309708 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107044173133 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543764586493 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.