Some people think an international car free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution Others think there are more effective ways to do this Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others ‎think there are more effective ways to do this.‎ Discuss both sides and give your opinion.‎

It is believed that one of choices to decline air pollution is Government globally does a day ‎without cars on the road due to saving vehicle’s fuel. However, the effectiveness of odd-even ‎method system is an alternative ways.‎

A wide world car-free day system is generally saving more fuel in order to grow down the ‎amount of air pollution. That is to say, automobiles banned going through the road, especially ‎main road with crowded road users. This causes the fuel is not used and kept it more efficient. ‎As a result, vehicle’s users lead to use fuel in appropriate way, so they tend to keep more money ‎allocating to purchase fuel. For instance, in 2010, since the policy of Government in Malaysia ‎prohibited using cars in weekend, the number of cars’ users kept money relating to expenditure ‎for fuel rose, leading to save fund from 5 million to 30 million rupiah a year for purchasing about ‌‎30 liters refill.‎

This contrasted to other society that implementing odd-even method system on the road has a ‎tendency to reduce air pollution due to monitoring busy road. This is because, the number of ‎public and private cars avoided from traffic congestion, and this tends to vehicles are easy to ‎move forward. Therefore, it is necessary to remove condensed air pollution due to cars’ exhaust, ‎resulting road users inhaling less of pollutants. For example, Jakarta, the capital city of Indonesia ‎has been applied odd-even regulation for a decade, between 2000 and 2010, possible reducing ‎gas emission of cars in the main road approximately 780 micrograms per cubic meter every year.‎

Odd-even method system becomes viable strategy to avoid high-density of cars on the road. The ‎Government might tackles the air pollution problems since it is more likely lower usage of fuel. ‎Where possible, the Government should control implementation of the strategy to avoid severe ‎impacts of air pollution. ‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28253968254 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92128357186 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.322701196 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.272727273 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167501797489 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068997081495 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042479507113 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108210518038 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321922720332 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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