Some people think that international news is more important than local news. Others argue that local news is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
As modern communication technologies grow, access to the news becomes easier. People are no longer limited to the articles describing regional events but can access reports from all over the world. Some belive that local information is the most important one; others argue that awareness of the international ones is more valuable. In my opinion, local news, as the one impacting individuals directly, should play a critical role.
On the one side, international news provide information about global issues, therefore help people understand their own country's position on the world scene. It creates a global awareness of main issues like an environment, wars, humanitarian crisis. It helps people support other nations causes, for example, donations received from all around the world to Haiti Relief Fund after the country suffered a devastating earthquake.
On another side, people are most affected by events local to them, happening in their neighbourhood. Awareness of this type of news helps individuals take actions appropriate to what is going on around them but also to react to any planned changes. For example, knowledge of intended road closure might be extremely valuable while planning daily commute.
In my opinion, while it is useful to have some awareness regarding International events, the local news are the most important. They are the ones that have the highest chance of affecting everyday's lives of people. Furthermore, information about foreign wars and cataclysms might cause unnecessary anxiety. It has been observed recently, when Covid-19 pandemic was reported. Poland had had hardly any cases and the government had been managing situation well but the spread of the world news regarding coronavirus caused a mass-hysteria and unnecessary panic.
In conclusion, I belive that local news are more important than international ones, as they are the one that have a capacity of affecting people's lives immediately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
... Covid-19 pandemic was reported. Poland had had hardly any cases and the government had...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47682119205 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92836569499 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4832707061 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330358409586 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990044268991 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107304670604 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196674068922 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108606641426 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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