Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of children doing paid work?
Although paid work is thought by some to be useful experience for a children, other people consider that it can be deterimental. Children can learn about earning money and gain independence from paid work but there also drawbacks to be taken into account.
On the one hand, there are number of advantages to children doing paid work firstly, children can easily aware of the money and they realize to do hard work for earn it. Secondly, they can easily learn the value of money and it’s use to practical field. This also teaches them how to manage practical life by utilizing it. Thirdly, before entering into professional life they they easily learn the value of money and how to manage it for professional life style?
On the other hand, it has several problems. The children potentially exposed to harmful environments, they used to work longer hours such as in developing countries younger children work for many hours by getting lower wage, it’s also unfortunate that they are not protected by law. Another issue in their student life they work for longer hours and do not pay attention to studies as a result student grades remained lower which cost them in their later life.
In conclusion, children can benefits from paid job experience but it can lead to exploitation or lower grades at school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90582959641 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56058131006 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533632286996 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2830544461 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397646887391 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165101368005 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150772968619 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252067479818 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925748291285 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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