Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that TV shows and movies play an important spiritual food in people’s lives. While many people suppose that TV programmes should be imported from overseas to make a valuable contribution to national culture, I would argue that it is necessary to attempt to produce a local entertainment industry.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why some people favour importing the foreign TV entertainment programs. Firstly, they could broaden their knowledge in terms of different cultures via foreign films or shows, which are rarely seen in local programs. For instance, through “ Discovery” which is a reality show in Thailand, I had a valuable chance to watch the shows of transgender models and understanding concerning the difficulties of these people. Thus, I show much more positive attitudes toward transsexual men and women. Secondly, they could gain countless opportunities to enhance their English skills. As the matter of fact that a huge amount of American films which are imported into Vietnam bring some benefits for young people, they could improve English abilities as they would have many chances to hear and read English languages constantly.
On the other hand, I believe that films and TV shows should be encouraged in a particular national area. One reason is that the young generation could not only learn about their national history but also take pride in their country. To be specific, instead of studying history from boring textbooks, students could easily draw inspiration in regard to the country’s past from interesting locally-made documentaries or movies. In addition, many foreign programmes are unsuitable for local cultures like everyday experiences or lifestyles, leading to deviant thoughts of youngsters. Hence, film production should be done in a national area.
In conclusion, although oversea movies and TV programmes have many advantages for the diversity of a country’s culture, it seems to me that local films and TV industry are a better way to promote national history and to educate a country’s way of life for young people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'important spiritual food'.
Suggestion: important spiritual food
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in regard to, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31845238095 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03444038397 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556547619048 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4728347154 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.642857143 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200267279449 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677766776002 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597731970646 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132649010627 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394533009503 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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