Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few people think the utilization of free time should be done by reading the contents and playing the word games it enhances mental creativity. Resting in a leisure period is more effective is felt by others. This essay will discuss both of the views.
First of all, making a brain active by doing activities like reading novels and word quizzes in their available time are thought by the people. It's a kind of training and improving the performance level of the mind, also the brain is the main processor that computes all the activities. It has lots of learning ability, in early childhood, we have an empty state of a mind and by growing age, we train them with different activities like learning and problem-solving. Exploring new contents and shuffling word games expand our brain in thinking capacity. For example, the Roberts compared with the humans, like Roberts human does have an empty mind so Robert is trained with computers but human minds are with the challenges and activities they perform in real life. The key to exploring brain activities is only by the mind game and intrinsic contents, it booms up the creativity level.
Even, most of them think being ideal is important in a free schedule. Without the proper state of mind, we cannot complete our activities as we want, even we work we cannot give an effective output. Engaging us in different creative activities help us to enhance our performance but without rest, it's impossible to achieve. If a student wants to learn music from the beginning, he is a starter but if he studies a few hours with proper rest then it leads him to the success. Achieving the ideas in an unconscious state of mind is the worst case, being idle is an effective approach to improve the learning abilities.
In conclusion, Learning by studying the books and hanging with the games will be effective if we have idle state of mind. So in my view, we have to give the proper rest to our mind because the well-rested mind will be able to compute faster and improve our learning ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74438202247 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60942054078 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51404494382 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0096250132 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233861982767 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770356600156 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402013381563 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147401209675 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397951341711 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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