Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people think that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have a different perspective on how to spend their free time. While many people believe that leisure should be utilized by mind-boasting activities like reading or doing crossword puzzles, others are in favor of complete relaxing. In my opinion, a balanced combination of both will make proper usage of leisure.
People tend to pass their spare time doing various activities due to several reasons. Firstly, when we do activities like reading, listening to music, and solving puzzles our mind is completely occupied. This habit in turn leads us to continuous learners with up-to-date knowledge and this way being more cultivated and productive. For example, physicians even suggest certain mental exercise most of the time for patients with dementia to enrich their memory and mental ability. Therefore, mind-enhancing tasks in free time are overall beneficial.
On the other hand, another group has their unique way of thinking and wants to completely relax at spare time. This is probably due to their monotonous routine and exhaustion from workload and pressure. So, whenever they find some time for leisure, they dedicate that to themselves and their family. This way they are ready to come to work recharged and rejuvenated with a fresh and relaxed mind. Hence, it is important for them to rest completely at free time.
However, I believe, the exact balance of activities and relaxation can make the utilization of spare time most meaningful. Although we have routines for a day, there are always ups and downs. As such, in the spare time, we can follow our mind and have some music, reading or puzzle if we like to. Conversely, if hard work or tiredness already takes its toll for the day, someone can dedicate the leisure to complete rest. This way, a person can have full control over leisure and will enjoy most out of it.
In conclusion, despite people having different views on spending free time, proper combination and balance of mind boasting activities and complete relaxation will make a person’s leisure most effective.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...make a person’s leisure most effective.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13392857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68418558475 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568452380952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9859159892 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7894736842 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329571930229 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978111414688 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621909192845 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189405745521 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291411865898 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...make a person’s leisure most effective.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13392857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68418558475 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568452380952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9859159892 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7894736842 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329571930229 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978111414688 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621909192845 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189405745521 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291411865898 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.