Providing proper healthcare to their citizens, is considered to be primordial responsibility of the government. Some people argue that health promotion is more important, rather than treating the ill and funds to be allocated for the promotion. I belives that both aspects are equally important, as it plays a crucial role in the well being of the public.
We all know the proverb, "Prevention is better than cure", it relays the importance of preventive aspects of illness. There are a lot of factors contributing to illness, if prompt attention given on time, can protect people from this. Health promotion involves a number of strategies like health education, environmental hygiene and so on. Recent researches conducted by W H O, proved the impact of preventive medicine, in health. The state can contribute nutritious suppliments, vaccines,and free regular check-ups, which are vital for the provision of well being. Routine follow ups of healthcare providers ,and an educated public can result in the development of healthy society.
On the other hand, people undergoes various kind of diseases and disabilities even though proper protective measures were followed; this situation demands the need of secondary prevention. Early discovery of illness and symptom helps in proper selection of treatment modalities, results in better outcome and life expectangy. If government can't arrange adequate facilities for the same, people will feel insecure, besides they will turn against the state.
In a nutshell, promotion of health and prevention of illness are the primary responsibility of government, while facilities for caring for the sick should be incorporated with these activities will give better results. A healthy society and individual are the biggest asset for a nation, for the same governmental side should be cleared in terms of facilities and fund.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, so, well, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48620689655 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10292141122 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644827586207 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5147533233 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164383098383 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531749494549 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518764182486 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095961583742 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273231820615 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.