Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. Others however, believe it is unnecessary because TV and the Internet can give all the same information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A few subjects are as likely to provoke controversy as travelling to foreign nations to learn other cultures is not essential. Instead, people can learn from many resources such as books, films and the Internet. I personally partly agree with this view.
On the one hand, nobody can deny the merits of travelling overseas. Obviously, it is a valuable chance to broaden knowledge and exchange cultures. People go to another country to actually study their culture or the way people are with each other. Of course, this information could be found on the Internet, however, what matters here is the experience people get from their journey. A good example of this case would be that Vietnamese people usually visit Japan where is known as the first sunrise country in order to communicate with indigenous people, enjoys the country’s traditional cuisines such as sushi, and wearing their tradition custom – Kimono.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why people do not need to travel foreign nations to study about other countries. Firstly, the cost of travelling to another country could be exorbitant. In terms of the flight ticket or extravagant hotel expenses for a couple of night. Furthermore, with the explosion of technology at an astonishing pace, there are numerous ways to explore other cultures. For instance, the advent of Facebook give global citizens considerable opportunities to chat directly with other country’s people and interchange cultures or in the near future, people are expected to develop the virtual reality technology to bring people real experiences in other countries without going outside their country.
In conclusion, there are a number of benefits to traveling overseas with the aim of learning about other countries, however, it is totally possible to explore these through several resources.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30612244898 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82910604117 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.64105401 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238518936803 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806352114749 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632050431802 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159123992452 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391978044625 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.