Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions diverge whether the decisions in a company should be taken by employers solely or by both workers and boss. Some people opine that it is the individual onus of managers, whereas others are against it. Personally, I concur with the latter view as I assert that the collaboration of both parties is more conducive for overall development of company.
To commence with, why some individuals advocate that decisions should be only taken by executives? There are various reasons behind this and the predominant reason is that they have more experience apropos to the managing of the firm and they are fairly acquainted with all the problems which typically occur in the functioning of company. Ergo, they know which alterations are entailed for the higher productivity and lower expenditures. However, employees are mostly concerned pertaining their own department and the smaller section of company, owing to which they fail to authorize decisive actions which are beneficial for whole enterprise. This can be efficaciously illustrated by the fact that in most of the multinational companies, namely Amazon and Apple, all of the changes are sanctioned by the executives sans the involvement of any worker.
Howbeit, the opponents of this notion opine that including the recruits in the policy-making process is more propitious since when more individuals are indulged in any praxis, the total sum of ideas generated increases exponentially as well as the prospects of better suggestions taken also elevate. Moreover, when personnel are entailed in such a procedure, their bonding with the company and their supervisors reinforces and they become duly devoted to their work. Consequently, the productivity of the company amplifies substantially. Even the researchers, for instance, have discovered a positive correlation betwixt the higher indulgence of the faculty in administrative decisions and the overall productivity of the firm in a thorough study conducted over the span of 5 years.
In my verdict, company related suggestions should be made conjointly by both the staff and the boss because I believe that it will help to nourish the bonding amid them and the ambience of the company will improve as the staff will acts with more responsibility knowing that they are now valuable for the organisation.
Laconically, despite the benefits of involvement of manager alone in the decisions as they have more expertise and knowledge of company, yet I opine that it is much better for the firm if the employees and employers take actions together as it not only helps to increase profits, but also aids in creation of superior ideas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 765, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...nal companies, namely Amazon and Apple, all of the changes are sanctioned by the executive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27251184834 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03957873406 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523696682464 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.925687804 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.928571429 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204626575537 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712865138837 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063825068559 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115590808852 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547257141456 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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