Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The bias among the genders is persistently prevalent among certain demographics of society. Some camps believe that men are blessed with unique qualities however females have different sorts of caliber. Due to this, I am partially agreed with the statement that due to different traits among genders, they should follow the career path that suited their strength and potential. This essay will delve deeper and will discuss both aspects to reach a conclusion.
To begin with, one of the most significant reasons for this belief is the muscular strength provided to the men as compared to women whereas females seem to have more mental and emotional intelligence. Hence, society has divided the particular job tasks between them according to their innate potentials. For example, males are more into labor work such as all hard jobs which need physical strength, however, the occupation like teaching, nursing, social worker etc have more ratio of female worker due to more emotional power. Additionally, women are considered a commodity. People looked at women as a beauty symbol without words, owing to this, become eye candy for the audiences in most of the movies.
On the contrary, these days the society and thinking patterns along with the ideology of people towards gender discrimination has been entirely change. Novel recognition and legal respect have been given to a new gender option which is the LGTB community, therefore gender disparity has reduced and equity along with justice is being served to all the members of society regardless of their gender. For instance, women can become a stunt artist and men can choose nursing as a profession. Hence, career choices based on gender is out of the league now.
To pen down all, gender inequality has widened the gap between the career choice of males and females which is uncanny, however, due to modern approach and thinking, society's attitude towards this concern has been changed for a better and prospective future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...gender discrimination has been entirely change. Novel recognition and legal respect ha...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to nurse'.
Suggestion: to nurse
...ecome a stunt artist and men can choose nursing as a profession. Hence, career choices ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56421894133 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597523219814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8533652779 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206983465375 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066863882953 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574965961601 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103009051412 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517339309439 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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