Some people think the money spent on developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that there are far better ways to spend the money that is allocated to space exploration. I completely agree with this statement and feel that protecting the environment and ensuring that every person on earth has a decent standard of living are far more important issues that need addressing.
Firstly, not all countries have space exploration programs. Only countries with huge economies, such as America, Russia, China, and Japan, can afford to fund such programs. However, the money that is spent on these programs is considerably large and could be far better used for other purposes, in particular, addressing environmental issues. It is undeniable that humans are polluting the planet and destroying the environment at a rapid rate, and there seems to be no real action in place to prevent a global environmental catastrophe from occurring in the near future. The billions of dollars that are being spent on space exploration every year could be used to fund programs aimed at restoring the environment so that future generations have a healthy and safe planet to live on.
Furthermore, while there are millions of people around the world who do not have enough food to eat each day or a decent home to live in, spending billions of dollars on space exploration programs seems to be ludicrous. Instead, these billions of dollars could make a huge difference in the lives of millions by funding programs designed to help educate, feed, and house the disadvantaged, impoverished, and sick people of the world, which would be far more significant than the benefits that may be acquired from space exploration. We could spend billions of dollars and many years exploring space but gain nothing from it, while in the same period of time that money could improve the lives of millions of people.
In conclusion, I believe that although there may be some benefit in space exploration until the issues of the environment and poverty on the planet are completely addressed, funding for space exploration should be absolutely minimized.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 644, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...gain nothing from it, while in the same period of time that money could improve the lives of m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10355029586 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83648821924 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3732663955 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.818181818 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7272727273 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203339784828 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903906899624 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711965268574 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139309047641 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455226737546 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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