Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are individuals who assume that the most meaningful aspect of being prosperous is having the opportunity to help others in need. I strongly favor the statement based on the following explanations.
To begin with, having an excessive amount of wealth certainly provides the individual with a sense of security. Needless to mention, the rich do not need to weigh their income and consumption on daily basis. Although there will be overwhelming tasks and responsibilities to sustain the existing wealth, the lifestyle of a wealthy person is sure to be more convenient than its poor counterparts. Having the cup full, the rich people will consider improving the living standard of the general people using their financial resources. To cite an example, Bill Gates and his wife established a website that provides free access to thousands of textbooks online, aiming to assist the individuals who have limited outreach to the learning materials.
Likewise, the general well-being of the globe as a whole is evolving around the interaction between wealthy nations and poor nations. In addition, the entrenched economies are likely to consider environmental preservative manners such as promoting 'Green planet', whilst the developing countries have no other choice but to cut the environmental corner, rather than to risk falling further behind globally. The point is, only the wealthy nations can pay attention to the prosperity of the earth since their citizens have been provided the finest products while the people from poor nations are still finding it difficult to make the ends meet. This is part of the reasons why prosperous countries like G7 propose development projects like 'B3W' to ensure and promote the economic, educational, and social welfare of the developing countries. Another obvious example would be the widespread provision of the Covid 19 vaccine around the world as it is only the rich countries that can manufacture, purchase or donate the doses to those in need.
To conclude, financial prosperity is not a natural occurrence that can be happened to all individuals although one can attempt to achieve it. With the aforementioned evidence and explanations, only the sharing of the rich can benefit the poor to a small or large extent which will subsequently in the occurrence of more wealthy people. In fact, life is meaningful only when you can use your resources both for yourself and for the people surrounding you.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, so, still, well, while, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23918575064 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92870786072 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58524173028 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4397730422 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.266666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144574782527 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472079910411 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049732786798 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893993013339 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176158573578 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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