Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A majority of people think that wealthier people have more options to help other needy people around the world. This essay agrees that, rich people should help the vulnerable households through multiple career developmental activities. The essay will first discuss the fact that rich people can contribute to eradicate the problem of poverty and also create the employment opportunity to secure the financial status of family.
It is clear that, rich people can donate their huge economy to the ultra-poor household regarding minimizing the worse form of poverty level from the world. Moreover, the significant contribution to the vulnerable people would be in the form of cash and the goods regarding uplifting their standard of living. As a result of that, vulnerable households can fulfill their basic needs of their families and move ahead towards the further prosperity. For example, “The Himalayan Times” recently reported that, 40% of world poverty level out of 100% have decreased just because of the cumulative donation of economic by world richest people to the marginalized households.
On the other hand, with a sound economy rich people can create income generating activity to strengthen family income in long run is the one and helps to boost up individual knowledge and skills internationally on the other hand. Moreover, huge proportion of semi skills and unskilled individual get opportunity to work in the professional field which helps them to secure their professional career in future with more comprehensive manner. As a consequent of that, economic level of family will be secured and ultimately helps to improve national gross domestic price in a long run. For instance, Chaudari Group is the primary example because he has provided multiple work opportunities to the unskilled and semi skills person in various micro industries project within the Nepal.
In conclusion, donation of certain amount by the rich people to the poor household helps to improve healthy family life through fulfilling multiple family needs and also would help to improve work opportunities to secure family income. Lastly, I personally believe that, it is always good to share few amount of economy by wealthy person to improve the living standard of vulnerable households.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 716, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...opportunities to the unskilled and semi skills person in various micro industries proj...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'few amounts'.
Suggestion: few amounts
...elieve that, it is always good to share few amount of economy by wealthy person to improve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38055555556 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81906948793 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502777777778 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1237129077 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154146365837 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606259946044 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339086066864 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10027857427 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361999882907 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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