Some people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising family‚ and therefore the government should support them financially.Do you agree or disagree??
The lifestlye has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades.Presently‚women are stepping out of houses for work in order to manage astronomical outlays which influenced their families negatively.Hence‚ it is argued that mother should be at home to look after family and therefore served with financial assistance by administration.Here‚ i would like to discord with given statement.
There are numerous points to endorse my point of view.First and foremost‚ the contribution of working mothers to boost productivity at work places is highly commendable.Hence‚ monetary aids could deprive working sectors of famale's exceptional talent.Moreover‚ governments of some thriving nations have to manage hefty sum of money to facilitate people with optimum transportation‚education and employment opportunities.Thus‚ they may not have adaquate fund to confer financial support to mothers.
Further emphasizing on my point of view‚ in male domineering society it is essential for females to rub shoulder with man in every walk of life to bring equality and to develop self esteem.Consequently‚ the idea of money endorsement seems to be useless.By contrast others have conflicting opinions.
They think that‚ children do not attain social etiquettes and educational support due to busy lifestyle of parents.Besides this‚ they may join crime activities on account of less observation.In addition‚family life is supposed to be worse in the absence of mother.For instance‚neither domestic chores can be managed properly nor children and grandparents could be taken care of.Thence‚ mothers must be supported with sufficient lucre so that they do not need to work for money.
To recapitulate‚mother is backbone of every family union.Undeniably‚financial support ensure overall development of family.However‚ some other alyerantives can be searched rather than binding women with home responsibilities only
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.288256227758 0.247107183377 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.217081850534 0.155533422707 140% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0996441281139 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0320284697509 0.0501214627716 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0355871886121 0.0437548338989 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153024911032 0.122226691241 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0569395017794 0.0403226058552 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 4.49864401395 2.80594681477 160% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0604982206406 0.0326793684256 185% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0320284697509 0.0861772015684 37% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0320284697509 0.021408717616 150% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00355871886121 0.011925033212 30% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1945.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.02166064982 6.12580529183 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429602888087 0.374742101984 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.350180505415 0.28420135186 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.249097472924 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184115523466 0.137316102897 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.49864401395 2.80594681477 160% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671480144404 0.56093040696 120% => OK
Word variations: 82.1971910773 60.7387585426 135% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 55.4 20.7743622355 267% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 104.69460349 49.517814964 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 389.0 127.492653851 305% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.4 20.7743622355 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.2 0.814263465372 393% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 3.99599198397 450% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 90.4180505415 49.1944974215 184% => OK
Elegance: 1.75 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185277170505 0.332605444948 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.207799161092 0.102741220458 202% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0394024486741 0.0668466124924 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 4.52339250222e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114381589684 0.134430193775 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029566043846 0.0742795772207 40% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282107511909 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0555626429101 0.0638462369009 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114381589684 0.228012699653 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029566043846 0.058150111329 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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