Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Attracting the people and providing education or entertainment is the main aim of museums. While museums give the exceptional knowledge about artefacts, simultaneously it provides the way to learn information with entertain. This essay would discuss both point of view. and my perception about this controversial topic.
First and foremost, museums have been developed by adding the different kinds of art from prominent artist. Hence, young people enjoy the art of individuals. Since museums provide the various entertain, art based on many things like caricature, movie clips and many more. Therfore, such things provide entertain with great knowledge of art. Furthermore, in museums such artefacts and they are funny as well. So, here teenagers are usually come and enjoy the beauty of arts. Moreover, art has been became the creativity. So, here work of different artists attract the juvenile and they know th excellent work of artist.
Although museums contain the arts and gives the happy moment to young people, knowledge is significant concern that are convey. For instance, drawing of eminent artist always represents hidden meaning and his emotion. So, museum is the place where people have to identify mystry about artefacts and it is very essential for every visitor in order to understand meaning of the art. Secondly, creation of various virtusuo like music composition and photographs are paramount concern for country. Hence, museum is the place of history and knowledge that contain important things and it is not for entertainment purpose. Secondly, museum contain expensive artefacts where silence and pre-security are required. if it becomes the place where people enjoy the time then there are several arts may be damaged due to people not care about work of artists.
To conclude, I strongly believe that museums are the place for knowledge rather than entertain; however, some arts are funny but overall it is part of the museums. Hence, it is not place for time pass. Museums are the symbol of famous work that is done by the artist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24471299094 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67844496201 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537764350453 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6088228175 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0454545455 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25937462623 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743403456789 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536569518254 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165978400419 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334230460912 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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