Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of them is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many believe that museums ought to primarily focus on fascinating, rather than educational, purpose, while others argue the opposite. Despite ostensibly legitimate defenses underpinning the former sentiment, I am of the opinion that museums should accomplish the mission of educating a citizenry.
Those who advocate for entertaining purpose of museums point to a combination of reasons. In the first place, it can be difficult to instill historical and cultural value to the general public, especially to younger generation as they may become bored when approaching too much educational content. Moreover, foreigners often have limited amount of time to pay a visit to such historical institutions. As a result, there is a wide range of museums in the world nowadays applying cutting-edge technology to attract holiday-makers and leverage their key resources. To cite an example, the Tate Britain in London invited youngsters to transform selected artworks from 1840 gallery into hilarious GIFs using Tumblr, which caught public’s attention due to its unique and imaginativeness.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that museums should place an excessive emphasis on educating the citizenry as a whole. On a domestic level, students in every country are expected to learn their national history but these lessons at schools are often impersonal and abstract. Consequently, visiting the museum and seeing authentic documents from the past revitalizes history and inspires patriotism among every individual. At an international level, millennials will have the opportunity to broaden their understanding of traditions and events underpinning the modern world if they go to a museum featuring items from around the world. In the long run, this may result in a more inclusive and culturally diversified society.
In conclusion, though entertaining goal of museum is justifiable due to low threshold of boredom and restricted amount of time from visitors, I am largely against this being the sole purpose of museums owing to its educational benefits of instilling patriotism and widening the international horizons for every inhabitant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, while, in conclusion, as a result, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60615384615 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17572150866 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636923076923 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4353867193 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.153846154 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177068911098 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611509499638 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623051269019 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111717829491 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344007088267 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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