Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some authorities think that musical beats create happy moment to every listener. It is often argued that a finest piece of music is beneficial to people and larger society only while others disagree and believe that it has negative impact to both. This essay will agrees that every content of music is enough to explore the real situation of society and create a peace state of mind. The essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that someone listening music in everyday life can boost up the personal wellbeing by reducing stressful situation related to daily work life. It allows them to have in a peaceful situation by listening romantic and classical music which have beautiful musical beat and stories. It is therefore agreed that music is a worthwhile tools for continuing individual happiness and social history for long run. For instance, this is most evident in my country that listening folk music is quite popular among the youth to minimize the stressful situation that they encounter in their daily life.
Despite these positive concern some peoples still believed that it impairs people from the face to face discussion. Such individual confrontation is more important to develop the interpersonal relationship by shorting out the confusion if they have and it seems more convenient way to finding out more relevant information regarding the historical concern to make their society even more independent. Despite these eradication of the confusing state of mind is still possible through listening various content of music with excellent beats. For example, the Himalayan Times in March 2019 reported that musical therapy is quite popular in the field of psychiatric social work in Nepal where they employed this exercise to those who have bad interpersonal relationship.
In conclusion, the fact that listening music is more beneficial to every individual for maximizing personal happiness, however, some people still believed that it impairs individual from live interaction. As long as we are very clear to keep in mind that the importance of listening music the outcomes are entirely positive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...every listener. It is often argued that a finest piece of music is beneficial to ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...egative impact to both. This essay will agrees that every content of music is enough t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...essay will discuss both points of view. It is clear that someone listening music...
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Message: 'He' in subjunctive clause must be used base form of the verb: 'listen'.
Suggestion: listen
...s of view. It is clear that someone listening music in everyday life can boost up the...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave beautiful musical beat and stories. It is therefore agreed that music is a wor...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tool'?
Suggestion: tool
...efore agreed that music is a worthwhile tools for continuing individual happiness and...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this eradication' or 'these eradications'?
Suggestion: this eradication; these eradications
... society even more independent. Despite these eradication of the confusing state of mind is still...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pairs individual from live interaction. As long as we are very clear to keep in mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25513196481 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72519707852 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530791788856 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4609149041 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263738147113 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958694034934 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530806113923 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158577697147 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550451619293 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.