At the outset of the new millennium music has been attaining prioritisation considerably by every age group due to the superficiality it has. It is claimed by a host of individuals that music affecting the society in a positive manner. Others including me considered that music is normally a way of spending leisure. Both the view points will be articulated in forthcoming paragraphs prior to writing an appropriate conclusion.
It is noteworthy to mention that the view of music playing imparative role in society has taken huge preference of some people due to some factors. The most noticable among these is that the demonstration of cultures and traditions lead by music, through which a chance of getting tremendous knowledge about cultural values is offered to individuals. For instance, in India, large number of songs representing traditions of different parts of Nation and with the help of that old values are emerging as never before and encouragement of following our cultures increasing among youngsters. The another reason is that, music provides the unity among people by appreciating lyrically every region whether it is Sikh, hindu or Muslim. Hence, it is enough to prove that how music positively infuencing the society.
On the contrary side there are also some individuals who thought music is only listened for entertainment purpose owing to some reason. The prevalent factor is that stress can be relieved by listening music which pave the ways for having a tension free mind. For example, in Australia, 38% people accounted those who become habitual of listening music before going to sleep and it provides them relaxation. The another factor is that music seemed a spare time activity to people and they considered it better than other activities. Thus, it can be said that music is a great contributor for having a burden less mental situation.
In conclusion, after the analyzation of both the view points from my mind, as a representative of cultural values, music is tremendously fruitful for society. However, in such a way it helping the people to come out from stress is appreciable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15028901734 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98853992966 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56936416185 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2226242671 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212890774475 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703215698789 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616363265671 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116219447442 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401920767691 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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