Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news.
However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
People have different views about whether the traditional print media is the best method to provide news. While some people think argue that they can receive the information from
electric media, personally i believe that newprint is irreplaceable.
There are several reasons why some people think online media can replace newspaper. Firstly, they may assert that the media in the net provide instant news and it is widely opened to pulic. Scrolling your smartphones can receive multinational information around the world and it is totally free of charge. Secondly, fun and eye-catching reporting way in electric media can effectively attract the attention from public so messages can be spread immediately. For example, in 2016 it was reported by Hong Kong Apple Daily that over 88% of teenagers tend to read entertaining political messages.
Despite these arguments mentioned above, i recently believe that the traditional newspaper is better. In the first place, the content of newspaper is relatively comprehensive which cover a wide range of information, such as local news, international issues, technology inventions and sport events. If young people were permitted to read news online only, they would probably focus on the gossips affairs in the entertainment industry. Secondly, famous printnew companies are highly trusted in the world because their high-qualified reports are written by professionals. New York Times is a prime example, which provides academic information to our society but it works as a traditional news company.
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for people to read news from online media, i personally prefer newsprints.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53307392996 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98245917934 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8442802961 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286205570703 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962875907343 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605051781367 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155289493224 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636697514287 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.