Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing a job from time to time
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that people should stay in a permanent job rather than a changing job. In this essay, I will discuss both views of its opinion and I believe that up to peoples' abilities, they can decide the best option for themselves.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that various benefits of remaining one job. Firstly, staying one job for a long time, workers can earn lots of experience and be a master of their major. In other words, the more time employees keeping on the same job, the more opportunities they will get to promote positions. Moreover, this is a secure path for those who always opt for a safe feeling. For example, old people should stick to only one job. As they do not have enough abilities and health to rival with young people. However, if individuals use their whole life in fixed-job, they will not have a chance to approach the new and challenging.
On the other hand, people who change jobs usually must face to huge difficulties. In contrast, to choose this way, it will make individuals become more mature. Otherwise, they can have different experiences in numerous fields. Many peoples' feelings of job satisfaction come from how many situations they adapt to, the skills they learn, the challenge they deal with rather than a stable job. On top of that, when employees change the job that means they will change their workplace and environment. Therefore, they can expend their relationships which is played an essential role to help worker when they get in trouble (according to John Hellen, who has become one of the most influential person in America).
In conclusion, selecting a permanent job or changing job has its own advantages and disadvantages. Each person ought to depend on their abilities to find out the right way.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in other words, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77524429967 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64494311708 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8953880437 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2352941176 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319572358938 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106961786084 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804389906331 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205372350515 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517170390071 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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