Some people think that the only purpose of working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Some people consider that salary is the only reason of working motivation. While it is true in most cases, I believe there are some other reasons that draw people to work harder.
Without doubt, the basis aim of work is to earn money and it could related people's passion of work. In this consumer society, people need to feed, dress, and dwell themselves and no one aspect of these can be done without money. Therefore, this decided people's thought that linking work directly to the money they will be paid. For instance, in Japan, part-time workers are paid for hours they have worked, this means as people work harder they would be paid more and in some cases employers would raise the pay by employees working attitude. In the same way, a well-paid work often will be easier to attract more people to apply. Whatever in job researching or working, salary is one essential element that affect workers attitude but this element apparently not the only one.
The elements decided whether people would working hard also include the pleasure of work and their interest in it. Volunteer works are the finest example that show people would not only work for money but some other meaningful reasons such as the satisfaction of helping people. For young doctors, it is a familiar idea to fly to Africa or some other poor developing countries and cure people by receive fewer salary than in their own countries. People do this sometimes aim to earn other price but money such as the reputation, working experience or self satisfaction. Therefore it fully proofed that money is not the only element that affect the attitude to work hard.
In conclusion, salary is one key factor to hard worker and there are also other reasons that related to people's passion to work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'relate'
Suggestion: relate
...m of work is to earn money and it could related peoples passion of work. In this consum...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...e elements decided whether people would working hard also include the pleasure of work ...
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Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...orking experience or self satisfaction. Therefore it fully proofed that money is not the ...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...ry is one key factor to hard worker and there are also other reasons that related to peoples passion...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
... are also other reasons that related to peoples passion to work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, in some cases, it is true, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84539473684 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33271467156 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509868421053 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0411471198 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307251930062 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134292458703 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551504055585 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198042360175 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643343769673 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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