Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the world today, traffic is one of the most concerning issue in many countries, especially the developing ones. It is often claimed that individuals should migrate from the rural areas to urban zones with the aim of solving these challenging problems. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that this view is awfully wrongheaded.
To commence with, stimulating people to live in big cities will definitely exert a negative impact on not only the transport system but also the socio- economics development. The number of city inhabitants is likely to reach an alarming rate, which lead to the enormous demand of transports accompained by much more widespread usage of cars as well as private vehicles. In all likelihood, this situation is on the point of causing more serious traffic congestion during rush hours along with traffic fatalities each year. Consequently, the authorities will have to spend a lot of money dealing with the results of these matters, which can have bad influence on the national economy and people’s living standards.
Therefore, people need to take proactive measures to tackle with the hindrances. Initially, the government need to take the responsibility of making a safe road environment by means of enhancing the national transport system which has been alarmingly damaged somewhere. It is crucial to eradicate unsafe road facilities which have led to some external factors of incremental traffic accidents such as visibility impairment, or insufficient safety services.
Furthermore, in respect to the citizens, people should hold campaigns, workshops with a view to helping them gaining deep understanding about traffic laws as well as conscious of transport problems. In addition, it would be much better if they are motivated to use public transports in preference to private ones to diminish the number of transportations.
To sum up, I wholeheartedly believe that migration from farmlands or the suburbs to the cities will contribute to make the equation get worse.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y and people's living standards. Therefore, people need to take proactive...
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..., workshops with a view to helping them gaining deep understanding about traffic laws a...
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...ibute to make the equation get worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40634920635 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11569794687 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631746031746 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2580277288 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182071182351 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562340661959 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338490326885 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873103787239 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343714365982 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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