some people think that parents have the greatest influence on their child academic development, while others think that a teacher has more influence. discuss both views and give your opinion
Whether parents or teachers have more influence on persuading children to get good results in education has become a topic of debate. However, in my opinion, both parents and teachers play equal role in a child's academic life.
In regards to the parents, they are first teachers of their kids as a child after birth first of all comes in their contact. He spends first two or three years of his life constantly in the company his parents. Thus, they have great impact on their children. Moreover, parents always encourage their children to study hard and achieve good marks so that they can compete with the fast pace of modern world. Some parents are very wary of their children's education for that they enroll them in after school classes and try to create an educational ambiance at home as well. Consequenlty, their hard work and perseverance inspire children to be successful in academic as well as other facets of life.
Similarly, teachers are persons after parents with whom children spend most precious time of their life. teachers often aim to achieve their educational goals by making their students successful personnel in academic as well as social life. To gain their motive, they inspire students and teach them to get out of the challenges of present life. Additionally, lot of children like to become favourite of their teachers for that they idolize them and follow their footsteps.
To conclude, both parents and teachers play their part in the formation of personality of children. The only difference is that one stays at home and another accompany students at school. Thus,they can join hands to help children get proficiency in studies and achieving their aim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...ual role in a childs academic life. In regards to the parents, they are first teachers of...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teachers
...spend most precious time of their life. teachers often aim to achieve their educational ...
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Line 8, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...other accompany students at school. Thus,they can join hands to help children get pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01063829787 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55893021336 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3559909406 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200215334036 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827059897653 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569930600859 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148800820536 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622984874627 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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