Some people think that planning for the future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent agree/disagree?
It is believed that it is unnecessary for those who prearrange for their prospect because they think that concentration on the current is more essential. From my perspective, I partly agree with this opinion.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that focusing on the present is more crucial than making a plan for the times ahead because of many reasons. Firstly, challenges we may encounter in the future is a source of anxiety, which is able to deprive many people’s feelings of pleasure at the moment, Therefore, people who pay attention exclusively to the present have an effective strategy to keep themselves contented and delighted rather than feel under pressure. Secondly, life is unpredictable since issues may arise out of nowhere, which means carefully-outlined plans could end up in trash bins. Hence, the philosophy of focusing on the present is of great importance in empowering people to have flexible improvisations and avoid being passive.
On the other hand, I believe that future planning is a key factor contributing to people’s success in their life. The first reason is that a detailed plan enables people to anticipate upcoming barriers they have to overcome and the requirements they have to fulfill. This, as a result, provides them with sufficient time to get well-prepared to minimize unexpected consequences as well as seizing potential opportunities and tasting the fruit of success. Furthermore, a master plan plays a role as a map and guidance in the long run towards the final goals in order that people do not get distracted and lost during the process. In other words, a competent planner is always oriented, and thus with perseverance, his efforts will surely pay off.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, good preparation for the future maybe never a useless thing. However, concentration on targets on the present also plays an equally vital role.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09324758842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05748727055 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9481300469 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0769230769 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306739911208 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921211411204 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682315829242 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158247877792 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495268733284 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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