Some people think that public health is at the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health.
discuss both sides and give your opinion
It is sometimes argued by individuals that the government is responsible for public health while others consider that each of us has to take responsibility for our well being. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and why I believe that individuals are more responsible for public health.
On one hand, the government is responsible for public health because they represent the society as a whole. Consequently, it is the role of the government to ensure the well-being of individuals, for example, by preventing them from doing things that are harmful such as an over-consumption of junk food, or the lack of exercise. Furthermore, the government owns the highest amount of money in order to prevent and support public health, for example, the government can invest funds through awareness campaigns or by subsidizing the medical treatments in case of severe health condition.
On the other hand, individuals as human beings are responsible for their own health because they are the ablest to take actions for themselves. Indeed, people have to be aware of their health, such as knowing the dangers of the consumption of recreational drugs and not taking them. Moreover, children should be informed by their parents about health issues as they are responsible for their education, for example, hygiene rules have to be handed down such as how washing their hands is important.
In conclusion, both sides of the arguments have their merits. In my opinion, I thoroughly think that both the government and individuals are responsible at a different scale but I also believe that the education given to children is the key to make sure public health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and support public health, for example, the government can invest funds through ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17543859649 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92561942154 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55701754386 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4050541443 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.5 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385061154541 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196132913153 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071246541176 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278192423902 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505075851299 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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