Some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory
is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
some people think that scientists experimenting with animal in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Scientific experimenting with animal gradually become a popular way among scientists for coping with some disease. some people think it is harmful and the others disagree with that. I believe we have to do such experiments to prevent serious dangers for human life but this way should be used only for essential matter.
On the one hand, if scientist had not tested some vaccines on animals the human generation might have extincted so far. In some cases humans life may be at risk and scientist must choose human health rather than animal health. Moreover, some experiments are not harmful for animals such as FMRI or any experiments which used for testing medical instruments. Even if we want to test every experiment">experimental way, it is better to do on those animals whose are going to die.
On the other hand all creator have the right to life and no one can not hurt them for experiment">experimental reasons. Although, experiment on animals is the easiest way, it is not the only way. Nowaday, simulating the human's body enable scientists to predict Whether this medical way are effective or not. According to a statistics to 80% medical experiments are predictable to what extent are harmful thanks to simulating humans body. Beside this, experimenting on animals in some cases may does not have acceptable results because, the body of that animal may have not the same mechanism to responding the treat with human's body and it may be clear in the future.
To sum up, However any creature have the right to life and no kind-hearted person will not accepted doing such experiments but, it is necessary for human's life to such experiments will be done in future.
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...s life to such experiments will be done in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, such as, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95638629283 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29486051631 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498442367601 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9309559296 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.066666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.608042394955 0.244688304435 248% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225716364723 0.084324248473 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170672397717 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.428269486262 0.151304729494 283% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.299976443347 0.056905535591 527% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.