Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that education plays an indispensable role in the development of children. While many people suppose that the global news should be considered to study at secondary schools, I would argue that it has no place within schools.
On the one hand, there are two prime reasons why many people believe that the global media is necessary for secondary students. Firstly, children can broaden their horizons in terms of many fields coming from many countries when they are young. For instance, if they are exposed to Thailand’s culture via the lessons, they can understand the difficulties of transgender people. Thus, they will show much more positive attitudes to transsexual man and women. Secondly, through the international news, they can gain countless opportunities to improve their English skills, as they have to listen and read by international language constantly.
On the other hand, I guess that teenagers are negatively affected by the foreign news. One reason is that appearance of international subject costs Government a great deal to provide facilities for students. To be honest, students who come from the non-international schools or local schools are not chances to learn the foreign language, leading to expenditure on supportive equipment. In addition, this new subject can occupy the position of the major subjects such as literacy, math, and physics, which are much more important than others in the students’ schedule. Therefore, children are more prone to obesity because the incredible pressure of studying at school accounts for a great deal of how teenagers spend their time.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits for secondary schools where the educational system is upgraded via learning the international news, it seems to be that it brings drawbacks for both students and Government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i guess, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36896551724 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01787973543 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61724137931 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2257948591 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22570119579 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701464244804 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053415404549 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133016021974 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412336651485 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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