Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question related to whether criminals should be put into jail has caused many controversies among the public in recent years. While I agree that rehabilitation programs such as education and job training are impeccably important, I believe that there are cases that require the imposition of jail sentences.
On the one hand, criminals do have their humans' rights as well as a chance to rebound. By going through job training sessions and educational therapy treatments, there is a high possibility that criminals can reflect on their deleterious behaviors, thus being willing to redeem their wrongdoings. For example, teenagers who shoplift or get into fights should be taken into consideration of their detrimental living conditions or even the lack of social guidance from their parents. Under this circumstance, these youngsters deserve to attain their right to be educated so that they can become good citizens, contributing their competences to the development of the world.
On the other hand, imposing jail sentences can act as the prevention of highly dangerous criminals. There are severe crimes that the authority must be aware of to protect the lives of other innocent citizens. Take serial killers, for example, some of them may experience psychological illness which leads them to behave aggressively without feeling guilty. Therefore, a jail sentence would be more effective in securing the safety of our society. This sentence can also be applied to other severe cases to ensure the authoritative figure of the hierarchy is persuasive to civilians.
In conclusion, the act of imposing jail sentences is not necessarily effective for minor crimes, but it can be sufficient when facing more dangerous criminals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39338235294 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99252736789 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2646626157 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170892734276 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614317861374 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382560954081 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996159538904 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420753185183 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.