Some people think that telling the truth is not always essential. It is necessảy to tell lies sometimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Telling lies has been sparking controversy in societies due to its violation of moral codes. Given the suggestion that sometimes the truth is not essential, I totally agree.
From the medical perspective, if medical practitioners tell lies about the status of patients’ condition, it could save their lives. Specifically, patients’ mental stability would be ensured, thereby increasing the efficiency of the treatment, which would consequently culminate in the termination of the disease.
From the privacy perspective, due to the technological advancements, the number of social network users are on the rise, raising the looming threats of cyber attacks and scams, which would be partially prevented when internet users keep their displayed personal information in secret by making fake profiles. For example, many sexual predators usually take advantages of social profiles of teenagers, who always incline to display personal profiles publicly to make acquaintances, increasing their possibilities of falling prey to stalking, abduction and even sexual battery.
From the educational perspective, by telling lies, parents could prevent their children from being contaminated with negative and limiting beliefs. Scientifically, social external issues such as violent murders, terrorism, religious extremity, could provoke the curiosity of youngsters, whose cognitive immaturity still exists. In order to avert the ensued mental impairments stemming from the shocking social evils, parents should lie about these issues.
In conclusion, I believe that it is necessary to lie sometimes as they have many positive implications in some contexts. Therefore, Sticking to the truths is not always the ultimate option, some flexibility could sometimes actually lead to the betterment of the issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 50, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'lie'.
Suggestion: sometimes lie
...sion, I believe that it is necessary to lie sometimes as they have many positive implications...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96168582375 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13978070383 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651340996169 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4931488424 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.454545455 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127452431616 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534180727014 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431268904897 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796066448706 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529235006922 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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